How many words in a sentence? It’s a good question that doesn’t get asked often enough.
I say that because you can make your resume easier to read, and improve reader experience, by writing shorter sentences.
Words in a Sentence — Rule of Thumb
In case you’re curious, here’s my rule of thumb:
To improve the effectiveness of your resume, limit the length of each sentence to 25 words or less.
While some people recommend 14 words or 20 words, I find 25 words deliver plain English that readers can understand.
How to Count the Number of Words in a Sentence
As you can see, many writers maintain awareness of sentence length. It’s good for you to do so too. If you think you might have a run-on sentence, then take a second and count the number of words it contains.
To count words in Microsoft Word:
- Highlight your sentence.
- Click “Tools.
- Click “Word Count.”
How to Fix Long Sentences
Then, if your sentence exceeds 25 words, consider these options:
Option 1: Simplify it.
Option 2: Break it up into two or more sentences.
To further explain, I pulled this 28-word sentence out of a resume in my files:
Established and led a global program in health policy, set direction and strategy, raised over $2.0 million in funding, led major activities, and hired, mentored, and managed staff.
Option 1: Simplify It.
First, I re-wrote the example above as this shorter sentence:
Developed and implemented strategy for a new, 12-person global health policy program that attracted $2+ million of funding in its first year.
(See more about how to write “million” for clarity.)
Option 2: Break It Up.
Next, I re-wrote the example as a longer story told in three short sentences:
Sentence 1: Designed and launched a global program to develop world-class health policy professionals for governmental roles in developing nations.
Next, Sentence 2: Raised $2+ million of funding.
Lastly, Sentence 3: Selected, mentored, and managed first cohort of Fellows, 85% of whom met or exceeded professional development goals.
How to Spot Opportunities to Make Sentences Work Better
Now, I want to share my two favorite tricks for spotting and fixing run-on sentences.
Trick 1: Look for Conjunctions to Cut Average Sentence Length.
First, look for words such as “and,” “but,” and “or.” They often signal an opportunity to split one sentence into two.
I could have broken up the 28-word sentence above like this:
Sentence 1: Established and led a global program in health policy, set direction and strategy, raised over $2.0 million in funding, and led major activities.
Sentence 2: Hired, mentored and managed a high-performing staff.
Trick 2: Look for the Word “That” to Write Shorter Sentences.
Next, look for the word “that.”
I could have made the sentence in Option 1 above into two shorter sentences like this:
Sentence 1: Developed and implemented strategy for a new, 12-person global health policy program.
Sentence 2: Attracted $2+ million of funding in its first year.
As you can see, you can use your resume to tell a short, simple story. You can also tell a longer story (no more than three or four lines of text) about what you have accomplished.
In either case, your resume is easier to understand and has more impact when you use short sentences.
Also, if tightening up your writing seems like too much work, you can always hire a resume writer.
Updated July 2019
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